What is Totality of Circumstance? by Becky Moore

Totality of Circumstance is a term I learned last fall while participating in the Sheriff’s Training Academy for Residents (S.T.A.R.) program here in my rural community in North Carolina. I treated it like a free writer’s police academy, where I could also meet and greet new people in the community and get the inside scoop. The whole seven-week experience turned out to be super useful. Each week we focused on a different element of the Sheriff’s office, from traffic enforcement and fingerprinting, to visiting the jail and participating in a mock trial with the county DA and a sitting judge. Two things I learned stuck with me: during the “decision making” week, we were put into three scenarios where we acted as Deputies on the scene and had to interact with potentially volatile people. It was a nerve-wracking night for me because in my four decades, I’ve never held a gun, and as the Deputy acting in situ, I had to do just that. In all three scenarios, I died, as did the people I was there to “protect.” It was shocking and cemented my lifelong decision to not be a gun owner. Because three seconds go by in the blink of an eye. The other thing that stuck with me was the concept of ‘totality of circumstance.’

When law enforcement is building a case, they have to develop the totality of circumstance. Footprints in the mud, fingerprints on a gun, a confidential informant pointing the finger—none of those things alone can be used in court. So rather than focusing on any one factor, courts focus on all the circumstances in a case.

It was just the thing I needed to wrap up a plot hole in MINE BY DESIGN. I was mired down by the evidence (or lack thereof) being presented of a powerful US Senator sneaking around his homestead, around the corner from where a local police officer was murdered. But on fingerprinting night at the S.T.A.R. program, I got to pick the mind of one of the detectives who pointed me in the right direction of building the case for totality of circumstance. That helped me tie up so many loose ends and close the case in my romantic suspense.

Did you go the traditional route, small press or self-pub?

Even though I didn’t have an agent when my first romance was published ten years ago, I did start off on the traditional road to publishing with a small (now shuttered) Canadian e-book publisher, XOXO Publishing. I did three books with them before they closed during the economic downturn in 2008. The timing was perfect because I was working full-time, and I learned a lot about the editorial process with them. I’m always happy when someone gives the unknown, little guy a chance, you know? Actually, all of my books have been published with small presses—Decadent Publishing, Evernight Publishing, and now The Wild Rose Press. But small publishers are no less important. MINE BY DESIGN will be my sixth romance, but it’s the one I’m most proud of because it’s the one I had to work the hardest to finish. Following a devastating accident seven years ago, it feels good to be writing again.

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A dead cop. A corrupt politician. An innocent woman caught in the middle.

When Abby Markham witnesses the murder of a local cop with ties to a political dynasty, she finds herself not only in the crosshairs of a killer, but also on the radar of a powerful US senator. The clock is ticking for her survival, and Detective Ben Owens knows the best way to keep Abby safe is to keep her close. But as the danger escalates, so does their attraction. With their backs against the wall, Ben and Abby will risk everything to make sure she survives the dangerous web of political corruption, lies, and deceit.

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Favorite beverage? Coffee, tea, and wine.

Favorite place I’ve visited: it’s a tossup between Belize, Rome and Barcelona.

Around the world: Barcelona, Denver, Florence, Lyon (France), Paris, Rome, San Francisco, Vancouver.

If I had a time travel machine, I’d go forward because I’d like to vacation on Mars, pass through the rings of Saturn, see a flying car, and breathe in cleaner air.

When I’m not writing, I’m a voracious reader and book reviewer, a gardener, hiker, and a swimmer. When we’re not quarantining, I travel with my boys, people-watch for inspiration, and when I have the time, I like to sit out in the meadow and watch our chickens run around.

Gardening at its best! Eggs, hiking, our dog Maggie May, Scarlette the chicken, and the victory garden/chicken hut.

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MINE BY DESIGN Excerpt

 “While you were asleep, Mike called to let me know someone was messing around in your backyard again.”

“Someone?”

He shrugged and gave her a pointed look. “Most likely the same peeping Tom.”

“What did he do this time?”

“Scratched your fence. Tried to set your dock on fire with a Molotov cocktail.” 

Her eyes bugged. “What?”

“It didn’t work. Mike will take the jar to his field office to check for evidence. We don’t want to run it through the local forensics lab in case something bigger is going on. This might help us prove it.”

“Do I need to worry?” She nodded at their waiter and waited for him to set their meal on the table before continuing. “I mean, more than I already am?”

“Whatever’s going on, it’s in North Carolina. Getting away for a bit is a good thing.”

“I’ve got enough to worry about right now with the production, so until you tell me to panic, I’ll stay calm.”

 

DOMIN8 by Stephen B. King

Welcome back to the Visiting Authors Corner, Stephen!

You’ve been busy! Tell us about this latest new release. I hear it’s been quite the journey for you.

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Domin8 was the second book I wrote (I’ve written twelve more since) when I was contracted to a major UK publisher. They wanted everything from me after they agreed to publish Forever Night, and I gave them the outline for D8 and they offered a contract. The story of Dave was an idea I had carried around in my head for a very long time. I attempted to write it several times, one time I wrote four chapters and discarded them all when I realized I started at the wrong point. That was one of many false starts because Domin8 is a complex story. Dave Barndon is a 50-year-old car dealer who adores his wife of twenty-six years, and his three adult children. The only cloud on the horizon is that while he still desires sex with his wife as much as ever, she no longer does. Dave uses pornography to find release, and through some unusual circumstances becomes fascinated with women who chose to be submissive. Digging deeper into the internet through online chat rooms Dave gets to play with women, but, as he says, cybersex isn’t real, and he yearns for more. He discovers an internet website that specialized in hooking up married people who are looking for NSA dalliances, and Dave thinks he has found Utopia.

Believing Dianne, his wife, has given tacit approval so long as it doesn’t affect their married life, Dave edges deeper into a secret life; fueled by the internet, until someone starts murdering his lovers and tries to frame him. The police are getting closer and Dave must try to find who has targeted him, and how to stay out of jail. Things take a terrible turn for the worse when Dianne, his alibi for the second murder, is killed while he is in the shower, and Dave is arrested for three murders.

I watched the TV show that sparked Dave’s interest in submissive women which began his trek that ended in disaster.  Some would say it is his fault, yet some others look deeper. There are so many parallels between Dave and myself in real life, to make Domin8 as authentic as possible, for research only in writing I went online, and visited some of the plethora of dark D/s and dating websites on the internet. Some might find my descriptions of chat sessions far-fetched; I promise you they are not. As Dave asks the reader: ‘If what I did was so unusual, how come the internet is full of sex sites?’

Domin8 is a total work of fiction (other than my research) and written to entertain and most readers love the story. Of those who read and reviewed only one in ten guessed who the murderer was before he was revealed, and that pleased me to no end. The book is a thriller, a dark psychological one maybe, but also a police procedural and a whodunit.

Unfortunately, the wheels fell off the project when the publisher was bought out by one of the big four and they closed the line I was contracted to. In desperation, while the legal battle continued, I hired an editor, finished the book and self-published it. Truth be told, I was never entirely happy with the finished story, and in my heart knew it demanded better from me, though it did pick up some fantastic reviews.

Time and books passed and I found a new home with my wonderful publisher, The Wild Rose Press. About eighteen months ago, when I completed Book 3 of the Deadly Glimpses Trilogy, I picked up Domin8 and read it. I was horrified at the errors it contained, and I realized the editor I hired perhaps wasn’t as good as I thought. I removed it from sale and began a major re-write, confidant that I could do a better job, having learnt so much about the craft in the interim.

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I mentioned Domin8, and what I was doing to my TWRP editor, Melanie Billings and she was intrigued, in fact, she asked to read it. I was delighted when she loved it and wanted to contract it and so began twelve months of editing.

The nature of the story makes Domin8 hard to categorize. For me it’s a thriller and a whodunit but for TWRP the nature of Dave’s dalliances made it more erotic, and that made it hard to place in the right line. With Melanie’s help, I found the right balance, and from the very first draft of 150,000 words cut 43000 to the finished 103000. This is a case of less is more; fewer words told a much better tale.

My Beta readers, without exception rate Domin8 as one of the best stories they’ve read, and I am thrilled, finally, with the finished story. It has been one heck of a journey that took four years from tossing away those first four chapters.

Thank you, Jean, for hosting me and letting me chat about Domin8. While each book I’ve written are like raising children, D8 is like a special, most favorite child.

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